Sounds good.

[she doesn't, either, mostly because unless it's the blonde girl behind the bar, they give her a hard time about drinking]

And Basic was based on English, only it has its own alphabet which replaced the English one as people moved away from handwriting anything. That alphabet is called Interlac.

[Basic was her second language and it was weird]

I think you can! The sentence construction isn't that different, it's just all of those consonants.